I had to write some new work -- half a chapter. Also had to tuck in some longish bits of backstory and explanation. Hard stuff to add, which I guess is why it wasn't in there in the first place.
Right now, all those passages ring false. They feel awkward and intrusive. These line edits are the devil.
Heck. I hope this all reads better in a few days, when I look at it again.
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Date: 2007-03-23 10:57 pm (UTC)I had to write some new work -- half a chapter. Also had to tuck in some longish bits of backstory and explanation. Hard stuff to add, which I guess is why it wasn't in there in the first place.
Right now, all those passages ring false. They feel awkward and intrusive. These line edits are the devil.
Heck. I hope this all reads better in a few days, when I look at it again.